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New song - Detroit Waves - derek 2005-02-19 11:38:43
Last night at the Bowdoin College show (2005-02-18) Matt debuted one of his new songs Detroit Waves slated for release on the new album. Work in progress lyrics are available here along with a downloadable mp3 from the show here. Enjoy!
Andrew Sharpe
2005-03-01
10:01:02 am

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Regarding the lyrics you have posted for Detroit Waves, may I make the following correction suggestions:

1.) "some, would let it go to start again" should be: "so, we let it go to start again" That makes more sense because the next line is in the first person so it makes sense that the first line is as well.

2.) "and when, your warm enough" should be "and when you're warm enough". Just a grammar error, maybe being a bit picky but whatever.

Other than that it looks good. Thanks a lot for transcribing it and posting the video and audio. They are much appreciated!

Andrew

derek
2005-03-01
5:50:47 pm

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I wasn't really sure about that first line but that definitely makes sense.
You'll have to excure the gramatics. Not my strong point by any means.
buuttttt... done and done
thanks for the notice!!!!


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